Monday, February 28, 2011
The New Criticism and Formalist Analysis
Sincerity vs. Insincerity
While reading through the fifth chapter in HTRAP, I began thinking about the connection between sincerity and experience in a poets’ life. The poet does not necessarily have to feel something or see something to write a sincere poem about it. As Eagleton states, “sincerity and insincerity in poetry are qualities of language, not moral virtues.” This got me thinking about the authenticity of the poem and how at first, I was taken aback by how easily a poet can trick his reader into making them believe his sincerity in experience. However, the beauty of poetry is just that. The beauty is that a poet can use the language, tone, mood and pitch to create sincere meanings whether or not he actually experienced what he is writing about. This reminded me of a poem that I read in High School that is very applicable to what Eagleton discusses in chapter 5 of HTRAP. The poem is I Wandered Lonely As A Cloud by William Wordsworth. I copied the poem below so that if you wanted to read it and respond to it you could. Enjoy.
I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o'er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.
Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.
The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
A poet could not but be gay,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed--and gazed--but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:
For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.
2-8-11
In class today I was almost provoke right out of my seat when Krzys mentioned the word "lens." He for a brief moment mentioned how you look at the poem through different lens. It sort of clicked something inside of me. I feel any filmmaker or photographer can have a special understanding from this. When using prime lens you have a certain shot in mind. There is not as much option for zoom, you simply focus in on something. I think this focusing is similar to the concept of close reading. But with each shot and when you switch lens you can see something different. You could perhaps see more surface with a wide lens. I think when first looking at a poem it is smart to utilize a wide lens or even a variable lens, one that allows zooming in and out, mentality. Though as you delve into understanding the connections and intricacies of language and punctuation of the poem, it is helpful to continue the process with the mindset and discipline of using prime lenses with longer focal lengths. Nothing is hidden when filming with different lens, just as nothing is hidden in the poem. It just can help to see something better or with better perspective when using different lenses. When filming a flower, just because the camera does not see the stem for a moment, does not mean that it went away or that is it not important. The flower cannot stand without the stem. Every aspect of the flower makes up the flower. As Krzys said, you can look at every detail of a flower and note every detail. You can note its environment and its place in its environment. Ultimately though, you need to smell it. The roots of a flower are hidden underground simply as a result of its nature. Poetry has elements that inherently seem hidden at first, but it just means switching to a prime lens and rearranging your position to see a little bit better.
- Kelly Johnson
One Art
Sunday, February 27, 2011
HTRAP Part 1 Chapter 5 discussion
Thursday, February 24, 2011
Reflection on Bright Star discussion and part 1 of ch5 HTRAP
I read the first half of ch.5 HTRAP today and felt like I was reading about the organs and functioning systems of how poems live and breathe. To me they really seem like living creatures: The human has a mind and a body...and somehow they are interconnected by some spiritual, nonphysical soul. Similarly, a poem has physical body structures like meter, rhyme scheme, syntax and language. And all these organs are linked with tone, mood, connotation and "feeling." Another statement reminded me a lot of Fanny in Bright Star: "It is also hard to see why we should think of our emotions as being "inside" us, and so shut off from public view." Today in discussion we almost ridiculed her outward expression of emotion and how she was helpless without Keats. But why shouldn't she feel that way? Our emotions don't have spatial locations like the organs in our body do. Nor are they meant solely to exist in the private. So we don't have perfect control over them. On the same note, Eagleton states that "tones and feelings are quite as much social matters as meaning." Why is it so hard for people to admit they are emotional nowadays? Odds are somebody else in the societal sphere has had similar experiences. Is this a result of being exposed to the deepness and complexities of poetry in a formulaic and mechanical way that our school system provides? The meaning of a poem couldn't possibly be a "private process" because the author of the poem doesn't always experience that process personally. And that doesn't mean they are restricted from writing about it.
Sunday, February 20, 2011
Ah, happy, happy ode
Sunday, February 13, 2011
ode to an ode
Friday, February 11, 2011
Ode on a Grecian Urn
Wednesday, February 9, 2011
Ch.1 and An Essay on Criticism
In class we discussed how criticism and literature have a symbiotic relationship. I never approached Criticism in this way before. I have always ignorantly assumed that critics really served no purpose. The writers were geniuses and the critics were not creative enough to come up with there own work so they wrote about other people’s work. After reading Ch.1 of Eagleton’s How to read Poetry, it really lays out “The Functions of Criticism.” He early on addresses the idea that literary criticism is a dying art. I think that I am a classic example of why that would even cross his mind. I do not feel I was trained in this art, and as he suggests perhaps because my teacher was not trained in this art. I have been trained to close read. I think this may be why I struggle with reading poetry. As Eagleton demonstrates so often that people treat “the poem as language but not as discourse.” As I am beginning to see more clearly through this class, Poetry inherently must be approached as discourse because it draws meaning from everything and has a density unlike other literature. In fact, “poetry was pitted against rhetoric” for being not a battle of logic, but a battle “of the heart.” Additionally Eagleton makes comments on a belief that the value of Experience is dying. We like to rush for an immediate experience and focus only on the end result not the process leading up to it. Following such a claim was his commentary on Imagination. I found this to be inspiring. He points out that the reading of works can help make your own creativity and make your imagination more dynamic. After thinking about Ch.1 I tried to join that and Pope’s Essay on Criticism. At first I disliked the poem, I thought it was long, way to long. The more I read over it the more I tried to understand what Pope was saying and why he was saying it, the more I saw how it so beautifully related to Ch. 1. Rules of literature were derived from the ancient classics, and therefore it is necessary to study them. I felt like I picked up on an idea that most people are born with a certain taste, but it is the education we go through that kills that inside of us. Just as I feel Eagleton might agree Education kills students sense of Experience and Imagination. Overall, after reading Essay on Criticism I found the format more interesting. It is long, similar to the epic poems written by those he sites within the poem. He reference La Mancha from Don Quixote and that book is extremely long.
- Kelly Johnson
Wordsworth and the Paradox of Imagination
Monday, February 7, 2011
Essay on Criticism
After flattening out Essay on Criticism the other day, I sat down to work through steps two and three, bringing the poem back to life.
The first task I felt needed to be addressed were the italicized words. At first glanced, they seemed random and out of place, and almost made reading the poem awkward. I felt like some sort of verbal emphasis was meant to be placed on these particular words, as they were set apart from the author. Although I do not know for a fact the reason these words are italicized, one thought did cross my mind. Keeping in mind the poem's length and more flowery, Romantic language, it seems to me that the Author may have been attempting to keep the message of the poem intact. Look at the first words that are set apart (in the portion for memorization:
Writing/Judging
Patience/Sense
That/This
The words represent both sides of the scenario Pope is presenting to the reader. This separation is vague at some points, but I think it could be a factor in Pope's decision to italicize these particular words.
As far as the author's tone, it seems as if the subject of the poem is very personal. It almost seems as if the author's work was at some point wrongly critiqued. Also, although there is wit and humor scattered throughout the work, the tone is generally harsh. I found it interesting that although the language is very romantic in its nature, it somehow feels blunt when read.
The key message of the poem then - the warning to critics and detailed comparison - is contained in a tightly organized package. Somehow, though, Pope manages to retain a tension between the beauty of the poem and the sincere warning it represents - a tension that could easily be lost in such a formally structured and lengthy work.
romantic-era themes
In line 91 the speaker notes a child playing with some mock 'plan or chart' of an event of importance, like a funeral or wedding. He (speaker) observes that as children, we often feel a rush to obtain the maturity and responsibilities and freedoms of adulthood, but fervently questions this desire. Children have access to an honesty and joy that seems to be lost with the coming-of-age, and adulthood consists of merely acting out what others have done before you (As if his whole vocation /Were endless imitation. Lines 107-108).
The speaker feels serious moments of these losses of "visionary gleam" and the passing "away a glory from the earth," but he resolves at the end of the poem that he can retain the spirituality of infancy through memories and the beauty of nature. Suffering and faith breed a wisdom and new philosophy with which to look at the world and value its loveliness; the tenderness of the human heart allows us new spiritual moments in place of the ones we lost with childhood.
Sunday, February 6, 2011
Ch.1 HTRAP and Essay on Criticism
Eagleton says that poetry "combines the individual and universal." By this he means that while poetry can be expressive and aesthetic, it is also a form of social honesty even if there is "distance from the public sphere." It is flexible in that it can connect the part to the whole, (the individual to the collective) in ways that government, history or even language itself cannot do single handedly. In this sense poetry is capable of being the product of a writer who is also a critic, or a critic who is also a writer. In class, we talked about how criticism analyzes literature but how it is also a form of literature itself. This never crossed my mind when I was writing literary analysis essays in high school, but now I see the point. There is definitely a presence of pure truthfulness when a critic has the ability to peel back the layers of a poem, examine them individually for what they are, then fit the parts into whole again to expose the true message. When one takes Pope's advice, close reading can transform into noteworthy "judgements." And because critics have to fit the puzzle pieces together, it is necessary for them to be GOOD critics. Alexander Pope's Essay on Criticism justifies why bad criticism does more harm that bad writing: "But, of the two, less dang'rous is th' Offence, To tire our Patience, than mislead our Sense." There is more potential for damage when a critic preaches vague opinions than there is for an author to write with bad taste.
Friday, February 4, 2011
The Modern Element-Philip Larkin
This is a much more romantic way of looking at poetry when compared to chapter one of How to Read a Poem. After reading Kirsch's section on Larkin, I do not find myself thinking about Larkin "suppressing linguistic possibilities" that How to Read a Poem suggests that some poets may do for sake of making sure that their works of art "flow" (Eagleton 20). I do however, see his work as "a supremely refined product of human consciousness" (Eagleton 22). It is clear that he devoted his life to his writings, but his talent for writing seems to be an innate one, not forced or contrived, just very well thought out.
Thursday, February 3, 2011
Relationship Between Negative Capability and Poetry
Wednesday, February 2, 2011
Exhaustion
Which, I guess, is in fact explained by Pope's high admiration for the ancient poets and strong belief of emulating their style, passion and form. Pope places immense value on the processes by which a writer comes to maturity and worthiness of high critique. So Pope also says of the processes of becoming a worthy critic; the two, the author and the judge, must check and guide each other.
Eagleton also pays due homage to the ancients, but instead of strictly following Pope's focus of the critic's need for integrity, level-headedness and worthiness, he recounts critic's (specifically rhetoric's) places through time. Eagleton defines how the major world-wide events and resulting changes in ideologies removed and replaced rhetoric in the areas of politics, the public sphere, the private sphere, the transcendent, the specific.
Both authors, however, recognize in the critic the necessity of deep appreciation and understanding of the art of writing. As the author's true being as a writer is developed over time, accumulation of wit, understanding of human nature, so the critic must closely shadow the author's moves in analyzing methodologies, discovering contexts and intentions, relating ideas and examples -- and vice versa.
Analysis on Larkins' poem
The title is confusing in this poem. What you expect is a list or something clearer on how to read, or something along those lines. Instead, what you get is a poem that ends with “books are a load of crap.” This had me confused for quite a while. Why would someone dedicate a whole poem just to say that books are meaningless, there must be some sort of ulterior motive behind it all.
In A Study of Reading Habits, Larkin makes many things clear that I can closely relate to in many ways. He starts of the poem with a flashback to his childhood and how reading helped him cope with many issues. “When getting… cured most things short of school.” This is attributed to living vicariously through characters in a book in order to diminish his struggles in real life. He doesn’t clearly establish what those struggles are, which is a great way to include many people. If he had included only certain struggles then by specifying only certain problems, it would limit the people who could connect to this poem. By leaving it open-ended it allows readers to connect with the world of escaping into a book, no matter whether the problem is big or small. One thing that I think is clear is that he deals with bullies more in the metaphysical world. In reading a book about an underdog defeating the bully, or a David v Goliath story it’s as if he becomes the hero in the story and can defeat the bullies. I think this is attributed much to a child-like innocence and imagination. He can as a young child avoid all his problems, and become a superhero in a book while in the second and third stanzas his outlook on life bleak and jaded.
In the second stanza he already has grown so much that his eyesight requires him to wear glasses. “Later, with inch-thick specs, Evil was just my lark.” As this line shows, he has grown so much that evil is his source of amusement. Instead of focusing on hero stories or something to help him cope with his problems; he now is more interested in the darker side of books and possible humanity. The whole stanza is based on the premise of him hiding in the dark and clubbing women with sex. These metaphors could be considered as alluding to rape or some sort of violence towards women. Whether it’s because he isn’t comfortable around them, he feels ignored, or it’s just a sort of awkward teen phase everything is left for speculation. What I can tell is that it makes a complete different turn from the first stanza, from beating the bully to being a person who preys on women. The title would have me believe that it is intended to represent how we approach reading and the different things we take from it in different points in our lives.
By the last stanza he has already become jaded by life that books have no more meaning for him, because he can’t find a disconnect between reality and a ficticious world. They are too much in common and the enjoyment of immersing himself in a different world is gone. Now, the only thing he can read about is about the common man, about himself. “the chap who’s yellow and keeps the store seems far too familiar.” To me by this point in the poem life has come too far for the author to be able to enjoy reading, because he doesn’t have the child mentality that allowed him to just focus on reading and believe that heroes exist, and that they win. By the time adulthood roles around everything is based on having a job and maintaining it in order to be able to live, so you have to become a realist. There just isn’t time to focus on dreams and fantasy. So, by this point the only thing that you can do is get drunk, forget about books, forget about your problems and use alcohol as a coping mechanism.
I think it is all related to how our lives become jaded as we grow older. Children are the ones with the most imagination while towards the latter half of our lives we are so worried with having a job, the right women, the perfect home and all these other things that we tend to become more realistic. People tend to ignore and forget about dreams and fantasy, putting in their place a more sinister outlook on life. No longer treading there pain with hopes, but rather just drinking and dulling there pain.“A Study of Reading Habits” Analysis
When beginning to analyze my initial observations of A Study of Reading Habits by Philip Larkin, the most noteable trend was the shift in imagery and language as the poem progressed. Larkin’s language and imagery allow the reader to feel the emotions he experienced while reading. As the poem progresses, the language and imagery shift, allowing the reading to understand the dynamic relationship between the narrator and reading.
In the opening stanza, the images are childish and the language is simple. The opening two lines evokes an image of a child laying on his or her stomach in bed, so engrossed in reading that their face is between the pages. The next four lines further indicate that the narrator is a child, as a child is likely to be more concerned with “keeping cool” than their eyesight. It also becomes clear that the stories the narrator was comforted by the stories s/he was reading because they assured him that even little guys like him can still triumph over the physically larger, less intelligent (because they are dogs) and morally reprehensible (dirty) enemies.
The language and imagery in the second stanza is much different than that of the first. He has progressed to reading stories about “evil” for his mischievous entertainment. The narrator proceeds to indicate he has a coat and fangs, the features of a wild beast. The phrase “ripping times” means that the narrator had good times, but the verb “ripping” also has violent and destructive implications. The next line is perhaps the climax of the poem. The phrases “clubbed with sex” and “broke them up like meringues” reveal the violent and sexual nature of his fantasies.
The final stanza has a much different tone from the previous two. The author does not include “I” in his statement “Don’t read much now”, which gives the sense that he is not willing to give any more energy to books. Also, this phrase can be taken as a command to the reader. The narrator goes on to explain that he doesn’t read because he no longer sees himself as the hero who saves the girl, but rather as a forgettable extra condemned to normality. The final sentence indicates the narrator’s ultimate opinion on the matter: Reading cures nothing. If you’re looking for an escape from your problems, alcohol is your best bet.
How to Read a Poem
A Study of Reading Habits - Can't Escape Forever
Tuesday, February 1, 2011
Comparison of Chapter 1 of How to Read a Poem and Alexander Pope’s Essay on Criticism
Reading Chapter 1 of How to Read a Poem (HTRAP), I felt that there were several key points that stood above the rest in importance from the author’s viewpoint. Most were found in the first few pages.
First, there is the idea that critics produce literature as well as poets through the act of commenting on it. The relationship between poet and critic is dynamic; Each benefits from the other, and essentially are dependent on the other in terms of existence. HTRAP presents the modern idea - although arguing against it extensively - that criticism actually harms poetry.
Although it was not in the materials we have discussed in class, I recently watched the movie Howl, and found that the plot of the story, which is entirely true, supports this idea completely. Many may feel that Ginsberg’s poem Howl has no substance or literary worth. During the work’s obscenity trial which is documented in the movie, numerous critics are called to the stand to defend the poem’s legitimacy, or to argue that it is worthless. Some of the witnesses argued that because the poem did not follow a set pattern, it was simply the lewd ramblings of a maniac. One of the witnesses, however, looked at the poem from an appropriate critical perspective. He presented the idea that although the poem was obscene, it was simply an honest representation of the subculture of that day, and perhaps even a true portrayal of the thoughts and imaginations of a majority of 1950s culture. He understood that, as it is explained in HTRAP, a large part of criticism is understanding the forces that shape a particular sentence in a piece of work. Poetry is a conglomeration of art and existence; they go hand in hand. Thus, to understand the meaning of a poem, both must be at the forefront during analyzation.
In comparison, Alexander Pope’s Essay on Criticism speaks to the importance of reading a work in context.
A perfect Judge will read each Work of Wit
With the same Spirit that its Author writ,
This stanza of the lengthy work cautions a critic to avoid neglecting the life and times of the poet. Although it may seem negligible - especially when lost within the many words and nuances that make up a poem - remembering the context can be key to the understanding of the author’s intent.
Also, it is mentioned in HTRAP that it may seem unfashionable in our modern world to cling to these age old methods of critique. Chapter 1 speaks of students who are led to only conduct ‘content analysis,’ skimming the poem and describing what is going on. It is important, though, to treat poetry as a discourse, attending to language and all of its density and implications (including cultural context) rather than simply disembodying the poem and giving a sort of summary.
Both HTRAP and Essay on Criticism discuss the history of poetry and rhetoric in detail, although HTRAP goes beyond the 1711 date on which Essay on Criticism was published. It is a bit ironic that Pope’s work calls for an avoidance of trends. Consider the stanza:
Avoid Extreams; and shun the Fault of such,
Who still are pleas'd too little, or too much.
At ev'ry Trifle scorn to take Offence,
That always shows Great Pride, or Little Sense;
Those Heads as Stomachs are not sure the best
Which nauseate all, and nothing can digest.
According to HTRAP, this warning was overlooked by many of the romantic and even transcendental poets who delved deeply into the literary trends of their day, with little consideration to cultural connection.
One of the last observations I made while reading HTRAP dealt with the section on imagination. Essentially, poetry is not a real thing, and in that sense the criticism of poetry is an even further step from reality.
Because of this, it is absolutely necessary that the critic of poetry does not allow his analyzation of a work to be influenced by his own mindset. Pope speaks of this a bit in the opening of his poem. From his perspective, the best way to accomplish this goal is through self awareness:
But you who seek to give and merit Fame,
And justly bear a Critick's noble Name,
Be sure your self and your own Reach to know.
How far your Genius, Taste, and Learning go;
Launch not beyond your Depth, but be discreet,
And mark that Point where Sense and Dulness meet.
Steps 2 and 3 on A Study of Reading Habits
After looking at the poem by Philip Larkin, A Study of Reading Habits more closely and making observations in class, it is time to move onto the second and third stages by analyzing and interpreting the poem, looking at how it says what it does and use this knowledge to find out what it means.
By beginning the poem with the word “when,” Larkin lets the reader know that he is reflecting on what he used to do when he was younger, back when books were his way or escaping or relaxing. By using phrases such as, “getting my nose in a book” and “ruining my eyes,” Larkin reveals that he did not casually read books for fun, but instead, became enveloped by the stories and couldn’t get enough of them. The phrase “ruining my eyes” might also be interpreted as the idea of ruining his physical eyes in which he views the world, since all that he ever looks through are they eyes created in his books. He is no longer able to enjoy the sight of this world, due to his overuse of his eyes in his fantasies. Like a drug addiction, Larkin needs to see something that is not real.
The use of the word “cured,” shows how, to Larkin, reading was a medication of some sort, or a way to be filled with something outside of his body. Books were a way to find another joy, and he grew to yearn for this feeling. This can be compared to the end of the poem when Larkin urges his readers to just “get stewed,” or drunk, instead of reading these books. Growing up, books were used in the same way alcohol is used, and for the same reason. For this reason, it was worth ruining his eyes and having to wear “inch-thick specs.”
Through books, Larkin was able to become the bully he always despised in his real life. In fact, he could be whatever he wanted to be. As he grow older, instead of just using the power of his imagination to “deal out the old right hook” to bullies twice his size, he turned himself into some sort of dark monster. The words “fangs,” “ripping” and “dark” show Larkin’s malicious intent, as his fantasies grew larger. In his mind, he could become whatever he dreamed of, whether it be a vampire, wolf or possibly even a rapist, which can be inferred through the line, “the women I clubbed with sex.” The idea of escaping his everyday life through books is again made clear in the second stanza. Instead of living governed by rules, Larkin yearns to be free and roam as he pleases, in a place different from his real life.
Finally, by bringing the reader into present time, Larkin explains how books today are no longer able to fulfill the job they once did. Instead of reading about evil and dark books, where he could take on the role of the villain, Larkin is constrained by stories of the common man. He no longer wishes to read these stories, believing they are stories of himself and not who he seeks to be. As he states these stories, “seem far to familiar,” since he is now the one actually living them. No longer do books help him escape, instead they reveal more truth about his life, which in turn causes him to call them “a load of crap.” Now, instead of books, Larkin turns to drinking in hopes of escaping and attaining his dreams.